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Nanami Kyuuten

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PostSubject: | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]   | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] Icon_minitimeFri Jan 01, 2016 2:40 am

Name ;; | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]
Rank ;; A
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; Suiton
Range ;; 1 meter for every point in the users chakra stat
Power ;; 4
Speed ;; 4
Cool Down;; 4 Posts
Description ;; With just a set of seals, the user continuously converts chakra sent to their gullet into water, regurgitating a massive waterfall that spreads and threatens to sweep unprepared shinobi off of their feet. Though effective at knocking opponents all around the user away, its true purpose is to fill the area with a rushing seal of water, aiming to flatten and crush all those caught beneath what will soon become rushing waves. Those with massive chakra pools are said to create entire seas in areas barren of water, while an average shinobi could only measure up to a pond or lake's size without expending all of their chakra. From there, the user is capable of riding atop the rushing waves, and can use the water as a source for one's jutsu.
Requirements ;; Ninjutsu & Suiton
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| Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] REnKfDl
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PostSubject: Re: | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]   | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] Icon_minitimeSat Feb 20, 2016 12:35 am

Heyo Futushi, this app looks quite good, but there are a few things that need to be changed before it is approved

1. This is a B-rank technique, meaning that it only gets 6 points to allocate between Speed and Power, so could you please fix that up

2. The range and amount of water produced by this technique, in Canon and on the Wiki it states that the more chakra the user has the more water is produced, so maybe increase the range to be on par with the users chakra stat, not the power of the jutsu or a flat 50 meters, like one meter for every point in their chakra stat, since it is stated in the wiki that oceans could be brought to barren areas by those with enough chakra

Once these things have been done I will be happy to approve
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PostSubject: Re: | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]   | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] Icon_minitimeSun Feb 21, 2016 9:44 pm

Futushi wrote:
Name ;; | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]
Rank ;; B
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; Suiton
Range ;; 1 meter for every point in the users chakra stat
Power ;; 3
Speed ;; 3
Cool Down;; 4 Posts
Description ;; With just a set of seals, the user continuously converts chakra sent to their gullet into water, regurgitating a massive waterfall that spreads and threatens to sweep unprepared shinobi off of their feet. Though effective at knocking opponents all around the user away, its true purpose is to fill the area with a rushing seal of water, aiming to flatten and crush all those caught beneath what will soon become rushing waves. Those with massive chakra pools are said to create entire seas in areas barren of water, while an average shinobi could only measure up to a pond or lake's size without expending all of their chakra. From there, the user is capable of riding atop the rushing waves, and can use the water as a source for one's jutsu.
Requirements ;; Ninjutsu & Suiton

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PostSubject: Re: | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]   | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] Icon_minitimeTue Jan 31, 2017 3:14 am

Upped this technique to A-rank, needs reapproval
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PostSubject: Re: | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon]   | Suiton: Baku Suishouha | Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave | [Canon] Icon_minitimeTue Jan 31, 2017 5:31 am

Approved
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