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PostSubject: Susanoo   Susanoo Icon_minitimeWed Dec 16, 2015 11:07 am

Name ;; Susano'o 
Rank ;; S(SS)
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; N/A
Range ;; Self
Power ;; 5(-)
Speed ;; 5(5)
Cool Down;; 10
Description ;;

Spoiler:
 

The Susanoo is awakened when the user has the mangekyo sharingan in both eyes. Susanoo has different appearances, colors, and weapons depending on the person who has awakened the Susanoo. Susanoo also has different stages it goes through as the user develops their Susanoo (done through a training topic or several topics using the Susanoo). The user of this technique must have awakened two mangekyou sharingan techniques before this can be obtained (i.e. Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu). Also stages 1-4 have strength, speed, and durable equal to that of the users stats.

Stage 1: The Susanoo is just awakened. The users Susanoo takes the appearance of a upper skeletal structure of the Susanoo. The users can also manifest single aspects of the skeletal structure to aid them such as using manifesting the rib cage for defense or the arm to interact with their surrounding. The rib cage of the Susanoo reaches the height of 10 ft and the arm of the Susanoo in this stage is also around 10 feet.

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Stage 2: At this stage of the Susanoo the muscle, skin, and armor appear on the Susanoo along with two more arms, making four in total. As stated before the appearance of the Susanoo's armor depends on what the person who has awakened the jutsu. However, all fully armored Susanoo resemble yamabushi. The user can also choose to have an unarmored Susanoo or not. The Susanoo now grows to about 30 feet since the rest of the body has been manifested and the arms are now 20 feet.
Skeletal:
Spoiler:
 

Armored:
Spoiler:
 

Unarmored:
Spoiler:
 

Stage 3: This stage is a special stage not everyone can reach as he puts even more strain on the eye. The user can now have their spiritual weapon manifest, the weapon varies from user to user. (These weapons can only be used while using Susanoo and must be app'd in weapon registration before usage.

Stage 4 (SS): A stage that is very rare for anyone using the Susanoo. Known as the "Perfect" Susanoo the body grows a tengu like nose, wings for flight, and is clad in robes along with ornate armor. This is very rare for Susanoo users as it is slightly bigger than the tailed beast themselves and also has power comparable to those of the tailed beast or maybe even stronger. The Perfect Susanoo can easily level giant mountains or even destroy meteorites along with being able to fly by sprouting wings. This new Susanoo is about 100 meters with its arms being about 45 meters. Since this is the last and most powerful Susanoo that can actually move, the speed stat will be defined by the users speed stats while power and durability will be undefined.

Spoiler:
 

Requirements ;; Regular Susano'o: Mangekyo Sharingan, Perfect Susano'o: Eternal Mangekyo. Ninjutsu as a dominate spec.

Wordcount ;; stages 1-3: 2,000 for each stage. Stage 4: 3,000


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PostSubject: Re: Susanoo   Susanoo Icon_minitimeWed Jan 20, 2016 3:42 pm

1. Go through and give the Susanoo a size at each section. Ie, for stage one how big is the ribcage (height and width?) and how long the arm is
2. When you mention awakened in both eyes, write it along the eyes that the powers of each eye have been awakened, it will grant a third power (that being Susanoo in this case)
3. On stage 3, let's not add the bottom half until perfect? Instead maybe say this is the stage where they gain/can use any spiritual weapons. Like Sasuke could use his bow, Itachi the totsuke blade and Yata mirror, Madara had the 4 arms/swords.
4. Any chance including a spoiler at each level as a reference for what the Susano'o would look like at each point?
5. In the requirements, let's include needing ninjutsu as a dominant spec
6. Let's write in, perhaps above the stages (maybe along with where you detail movement) that the susanoo will move at the speed stat, and physical power as well as durability is derived from the power stat?
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PostSubject: Re: Susanoo   Susanoo Icon_minitimeFri Jan 22, 2016 5:36 pm

1. Stage 2 could stand to be a little taller, but arm length is fine. For the perfect, 120 meters is a bit tall, let's bring it down to 100? And it's arms down to like 40 meters? (Just for proportions sake, having arms that go to your knees is a bit weird) Or to whatever distance makes more sense I suppose...
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3. Something to add that I just thought about, a sort of OOC addendum, that any spiritual weapons can only be used with the Susanoo and must be app'd in the weapon registration and all before they can use them
4. I like the pictures and all, but some of them are huge and stretch the page a significant amount, any chance you could resize those?
5. --
6. In it you mention that the Susanoo increase the users stats, however, it's more that the Susanoo itself has the new stats (being the users chakra for both speed/strength). However for perfect, it gains SS rank power, so let's cut that tidbit out at each part for each stage and instead say something earlier on like Stages 1-3 the Susanoo will have a speed/strength/durability equal to the users chakra (since 5 and 5) and the perfect Susanoo will have a speed equal to the user's chakra with strength/durability being undefined?
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PostSubject: Re: Susanoo   Susanoo Icon_minitimeFri Jan 22, 2016 6:12 pm

Indra wrote:
Name ;; Susano'o 
Rank ;; S(SS)
Type ;; Ninjutsu
Element ;; N/A
Range ;; Self
Power ;; 5(-)
Speed ;; 5(5)
Cool Down;; 10
Description ;;

Spoiler:
 

The Susanoo is awakened when the user has the mangekyo sharingan in both eyes. Susanoo has different appearances, colors, and weapons depending on the person who has awakened the Susanoo. Susanoo also has different stages it goes through as the user develops their Susanoo (done through a training topic or several topics using the Susanoo). The user of this technique must have awakened two mangekyou sharingan techniques before this can be obtained (i.e. Tsukuyomi and Amaterasu). Also stages 1-4 have strength, speed, and durable equal to that of the users stats.

Stage 1: The Susanoo is just awakened. The users Susanoo takes the appearance of a upper skeletal structure of the Susanoo. The users can also manifest single aspects of the skeletal structure to aid them such as using manifesting the rib cage for defense or the arm to interact with their surrounding. The rib cage of the Susanoo reaches the height of 10 ft and the arm of the Susanoo in this stage is also around 10 feet.

Spoiler:
 

Stage 2: At this stage of the Susanoo the muscle, skin, and armor appear on the Susanoo along with two more arms, making four in total. As stated before the appearance of the Susanoo's armor depends on what the person who has awakened the jutsu. However, all fully armored Susanoo resemble yamabushi. The user can also choose to have an unarmored Susanoo or not. The Susanoo now grows to about 30 feet since the rest of the body has been manifested and the arms are now 20 feet.
Skeletal:
Spoiler:
 

Armored:
Spoiler:
 

Unarmored:
Spoiler:
 

Stage 3: This stage is a special stage not everyone can reach as he puts even more strain on the eye. The user can now have their spiritual weapon manifest, the weapon varies from user to user. (These weapons can only be used while using Susanoo and must be app'd in weapon registration before usage.

Stage 4 (SS): A stage that is very rare for anyone using the Susanoo. Known as the "Perfect" Susanoo the body grows a tengu like nose, wings for flight, and is clad in robes along with ornate armor. This is very rare for Susanoo users as it is slightly bigger than the tailed beast themselves and also has power comparable to those of the tailed beast or maybe even stronger. The Perfect Susanoo can easily level giant mountains or even destroy meteorites along with being able to fly by sprouting wings. This new Susanoo is about 100 meters with its arms being about 45 meters. Since this is the last and most powerful Susanoo that can actually move, the speed stat will be defined by the users speed stats while power and durability will be undefined.

Spoiler:
 

Requirements ;; Regular Susano'o: Mangekyo Sharingan, Perfect Susano'o: Eternal Mangekyo. Ninjutsu as a dominate spec.

Wordcount ;; stages 1-3: 2,000 for each stage. Stage 4: 3,000

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