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Kashi※

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PostSubject: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2015 7:48 pm

Name ;; Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Tracking Fang
Rank ;; C
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Lighting
Range ;; 5 to 15 meter (15 meter max)
Power ;; 2
Speed ;; 2
Cool Down;; 2 post
Description ;;This jutsu begins with the user build chakra into their hands after performing the tiger,snake,ox and dog signs. By manipulating lightning chakra into their hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a hound. The hound remains connected to the user's hand, allowing them to control it during its attack. When attacking the hound effect is a sharp cutting force capblitiy of slicing limbs.
Requirements ;; Lighting as a main,and Ninjutsu
Wordcount ;;500 words


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Karumo

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PostSubject: Re: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2015 11:27 pm

-Need to define a range
-C rank techniques have a maximum of 4 points for speed/power, drop one or raise the rank
-Add how the user generates the lightning
-How does it electrocute them? Is it like the emperors force electrocution, or closer to the black panther? Needs more detail
-Broken coding at the WC needs to be fixed
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Kashi※

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PostSubject: Re: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2015 4:19 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeWed Dec 02, 2015 1:05 am

Just put the max range and add in a few hand signs to mold the chakra and then it should be good enough for me~
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PostSubject: Re: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeWed Dec 02, 2015 1:09 am

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PostSubject: Re: Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon]   Lighting Beast Tracking Fang [Cannon] Icon_minitimeThu Dec 03, 2015 3:15 am

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