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Kashi※

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PostSubject: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeSun Nov 29, 2015 7:46 pm

Name ;; Lighting Release:Black Panter
Rank ;; B
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Lighting
Range ;; 15 to 25 meters
Power ;; 3
Speed ;; 3
Cool Down;; 4 post
Description ;; The ninja builds up chakra into their hand (takes one post to charge). After generating black lightning from their body which takes the form of a panther, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them up to 36 feet radius (10 meters) by simply moving the panter to the next . Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water bumping up it's power. If the targets are in water then everyone in the water is effected base of the range of the water if the panter strikes the water.
Requirements ;; Requies Black Lighting,as well as Lighting as a Main.
Wordcount ;;750 words


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PostSubject: Re: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeMon Nov 30, 2015 11:25 pm

-Range needs to be a defined distance, long range is far too vague
-you say 'generating' black lightning, I'd like you to describe how, ie. Handsigns, inhaling and infusing chakra, or etc...
-How many people can be electrocuted? Is it a set number or an area of affect type of thing? Needs more detail for sure
-There's some broken coding around you WC and requirenments that needs to be fixed up
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PostSubject: Re: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2015 4:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2015 4:20 pm

Bump up the range. And 36 feet radius???


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PostSubject: Re: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2015 4:26 pm

i bumped up the range and yes 36 feet radius. I also added in how many meters 36 feet is.
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PostSubject: Re: Black Panther [Cannon]   Black Panther [Cannon] Icon_minitimeTue Dec 01, 2015 4:26 pm

Kami wrote:
Name ;; Lighting Release:Black Panter
Rank ;; B
Type ;; ninjutsu
Element ;; Lighting
Range ;; 15 to 25 meters
Power ;; 3
Speed ;; 3
Cool Down;; 4 post
Description ;; The ninja builds up chakra into their hand (takes one post to charge). After generating black lightning from their body which takes the form of a panther, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them up to 36 feet radius (10 meters) by simply moving the panter to the next . Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water bumping up it's power. If the targets are in water then everyone in the water is effected base of the range of the water if the panter strikes the water.
Requirements ;; Requies Black Lighting,as well as Lighting as a Main.
Wordcount ;;750 words

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